April+14+-+Sample+Essay+2+(35553)

__Structure: __ 5 paragraphs [35553 style]; 250 words
====__Organization: __ 3 main ideas, one per paragraph, with well explained positive examples followed by one (weak) negative point in each paragraph ====

**Is it better to live in the countryside or the city? **
====In this essay I'm going to write about whether it is better to live in the country or the city. In my opinion it's much better to live in the city, especially if you have a family. ==== ====Firstly, most people like quiet areas like village**s ** and **the **countryside but **you ** always find the best facilities in the city. People **who ** have children need to live near hospital**s ** and school**s ** and places like nurseries and shopping centres so they can be there in **a **short time. Although these places make cities busier they also make life much easier for most people. ==== ====Secondly, most factories and offices are in the city and people who work in them need to travel. It's much easier for people if they live near where they work so they don't have to travel a long way. However, there are many people, especially in the UK, who love the peace and quiet of the countryside and prefer to travel a long way to get to work. ==== ====Thirdly, I live in **<span style="font-family: "Tahoma","sans-serif";">a ** very multicultural area where there are lots of people from many different countries. There are shops, restaurants and bars to visit as well as cinemas and theatres. Life is the city is much more active and vibrant than life in the country. ==== ====<span style="color: #000000; font-family: "Tahoma","sans-serif"; font-size: 16px;">In conclusion, it's much better to live in the city because there are more facilities, more job opportunities and more entertainment. If I get permission to stay in the UK I will move to Lincoln. ====